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Everybody Needs A Ride Sometimes

She hitchhikes back and forth, from the Wal-Mart to the grocery store everyday. It is not so far; just a few miles.
It is easier for her to ask for money when only one person is looking at her, when she is able to look at them and know they hear.
She tells the woman she has a child, just a child. Her baby boy; he is so big now. He just started Kindergarten.
And she has to be out here. Because she has to feed her child. She just needs the ride to the grocery store.
She has been looking for work. In the mornings.
But she has a child she has to feed.
God, she hates to beg, but she has no choice. She cannot bring anything home to her child unless she does. A child needs to eat.
The woman gets to be the hero.
If she wants to.
If she needs to.
She tells the man she has a child, a child waiting for her at the other store. Just a young child and she is late.
She puts the worry in her voice. She has lost her wallet.
A few dollars to get us the rest of the way home?
The man can save the day.
If he wants to.
If he needs to.
Sometimes she tells them truth.
If she wants to.
If she needs to.

Comments

Anonymous said…
I really like that one. I can truly empathize with her. Maybe its a mom thing. Or a poor thing. Or a poor mom thing..you get the picture!
Anonymous said…
wow. i can't muster the words to express my profound admiration for your talent. very few pieces of literature, actually, very little at all, has ever made me look at life so differently.

The woman gets to be the hero.
If she wants to.
If she needs to.

you rock, sir, with a passion.

-lee
Anonymous said…
oh, by the way, could i link to this site? this is really awesome.
Jennifer said…
Wonderful story Q. Never under estimate the power of a mother :)

p.s... I was reading some of your other work yesterday and now I can't find it anymore? Is it gone? The part1 part2 etc.

Have a good day!
Queenie said…
Not the power of a reader's conclusions!
Thank you all for your thoughts.
I and II are linked in the title of III.
I hope you day was marvelous, too, Jennifer.

Q
Jennifer said…
no no not those... :) I've read all of those :)

It was something that opened another page and had pretty writing on it and was about people you see out in public or something. I wish I would have read more at that time so I knew more of what I was talking about :)
Anonymous said…
I linked something?
Hmmm.

Q
Anonymous said…
sorry. i was just randomly surfing through blogs when i came across yours. your blog is astounding, and i'd like to link to it, with your permission.

-lee
Queenie said…
Lee, you flatter me.
If I want to link a blog; I just do...

Q
Hi Queenie,

I'd like to use this one for the next Storyblogging Carnival, if you don't mind.

Thanks,

Donald
Anonymous said…
Beautiful story, my family was horribly poor when I was a child and I can truly understand the feelings that story invokes.
Queenie said…
Sure thing, Donald. Thank you for your interest.
Blacksheep! You are EVERYWHERE!

Q

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